Justament pensava que es tractava d'un text amb molts elements per comentar. Potser hi ha gent que no ha copsat moltes de les referències que hi apareixen... Però bé, som al principi encara, així que tranquil·litat.Crec que es veu clar, per exemple, que la columnista pren part d'una manera mot clara en tot allò que exposa. Hi ha molta modalització: molta primera persona, molta valoració, molta ironia, etc. I, pel que fa al registre que utilitza, està farcit de col·loquialismes que aporten un to molt casolà -potser massa fins i tot- al text. D'altra banda hi ha molta intertextualitat, molts coneixements enciclopèdics... I un fum de coses més que de segur heu observat.
O no?
Vinga, opineu, encara que siga per a bé.
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Bueno, bueno Xavi. Pues jo si que he posat que el text estaba molt modalitzat,que tenia col.loquialismes i tot aixo, pero en lo q me liat ha sigut en la estructura argumentativa ( perque el text era expositivoargumentatiu no??),perque no e posar massa be lo q era la introduccio, el cos i la conclusio...avorem xavi, sigues bo!!Sara
Sí, sobretot hi havia argumentació, però també tenia algun moment expositiu, tot i que minoritari.
Sempre sóc bo, Sara!
O no?
Hola Xavi, som Tara i Nadia! Pensem que no cal dir-te res més sobre el text que ens posares per a l'examen...tots eixirem "pillats"!!! Esperem que et portes bé corregint ja que el text era difícil i férem el que poguérem. Ens vegem a classe...dew!!
Si que eres bo,pero es que me fan mes por les faltes que el comentari perque com anava tan depresa no em vax fixar i...voràs!!jjaj. Bueno com diuen tara i nadia, sigues boo al corregir!!!
el comentari era prou dificil. el q mes me va costar era el resum. y l'organizacio. quina era la finalitat comunicativa? Crec q al elegir un text dificil sera mes flexible. no?
Soc sandra la q se passa el dia al bloc i hi ha q compensar-ho, ehhhhhh!
les lletres de confirmacio me fallen casi sempre i no me dixen enviar el comentari.
Tara i Nàdia: ja he vist que en general no vos h agradat molt. Sorry. om sempre, intentaré ser bo...
No sé qui: això de les faltes sí que és important, igual com la coherència del vostre text. Heu de concentrar-vos-hi.
Sandra: la finalitat, jo crec que era sobretot convéncer del posicionament de l'autora al respecte...
Com voleu aprovar si no endevineu les lletres tal com apareixen per a la confirmació...? (ÉS BROMA!) Igual és que les poses en majúscula.
xavi..!!
pq no actualises...???!!!!
este blog esta perdent audiencia...jeje!!!
en els dies que no as vingut a classe ja hauras corregit TOTS els examens...no???
esterem les persones mes importants del blog aprovaes..???
weno esperem que la semana que ve tmpoc vinges...jeje..que es broma..!!
pero pensa que si vens no anem a fer RES...!!!!ok??
weno ja ens vegem el dilluns...si vens... !!!
adw..!!!josep..mara..cris..jose..!!
Hla Xavi, jajaja !! Te has pasado un poco en el examen eh..!!Eres maligno, jajaja.pillin ! jajajajajajajaja! Adios que per ara no se me ocurre nada mas !! ^^
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Molt bonics els dibuixets. Ara que s'acosta Nadal... Qui'és l'artista?
JOSEP MARA, CRIS, JOSE: Uf, ja estic començant a recuperar la veu i no passaran molts dies abans del retrobament (he he). No penseu que vos serà tan fàcil alliberar-vos de mi. Dilluns anirà Víctor. Tracteu-lo tan bé com sabeu. B7s.
Eres Ino, que em dius que me n'he passat...? Tu saps que no. I prepara't pe a llegir quan torne...
Hola Xavi, soc sara. Qui es victor??bueno millorat val? adeu
Hola, Sara. Víctor és el meu substitut, que anirà dilluns (per poquet de temps, espere). Ja tinc ganes de tornar. Sona estrany, no?
Hola Xavii !! jaja E pues el Victor parece...emm...quiero decir que buen rollete sas ! jajajaja...Y que bien mexplico !! jaja El anonimo de los dibujitos es el que escribe en castellano, ocea muaaaaa !!! jaja...Recuperate pronto, vale ? Vinga adiosssssssssssss !!! ^^
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ooohhhhhhhhh no se a quedado bien !! jaja...era winie de pohh !!!! jajaja
Ja m'ho contareu. Doncs no l'havia acabat de pillar, el Winnie de Poo...Torna-ho a intentar, perfa.
Ola ! ^^ esque alomejor si tienes el formato ese del tamaño de letra muy grande pues alomejor no te se ve sas...? Bueno te se ve, xo q no re reconoce q es winnie de poh ! sas ?? jaja...Bueno, buenas noches !! jaja
Ok. Li posaré una mica d'imaginació.
Qui es el piolí d'aquesta classe...???? xan xan xan !!! jojojo...Bueno Xavi voy a navegar x la red jajaja
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___________________ (¨`?.?´¨) Feliz navidad tio Xavi...!!jajaja
No sé, no sé, però m'agtrada...
hola xaviiii!!!Bon nadaaaaaaaaaal!! saps q??la señora piolin esta ací amb mi!!jeje!!i ara mon anem a pegar una volteta!!jajaja!!!Qan descubrisque qui es mos descollonarem d lo mes en clase!!ajaja!!!sas o q??ja voras ja!!jejeje!!!
PD:TENS Q FICARMOS QUAN TORNEM LA PELI IXA Q NO HEM ACABAT DE VORE,EH(osinos Piolin se enfadarà moltiiiiiiissssiiiiimmmm!!i te dirà q eres molt maligno!!)jojojo feliz navidad!!jajajajja!!be ens vegem deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeew!!
De moment ja conec Silvestre Estic en la pista de la Piolina...he he he.
A si..? Y kien es Silvestre..?¿
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